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Post by Dark Knight of Steel on May 11, 2005 0:35:10 GMT -5
The first issue is now posted. The story brought to you by Scott, aka, LanternLad is up, ready for reading and review.
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Post by lanternlad on May 12, 2005 18:26:50 GMT -5
Wow this is utter crap! You actually let this guy write on your site??? absolutely terrible!
>>>whisper, whisper, whisper<<<
Huh? What?
>>>whisper, whisper, whisper<<<
This is my story? Oh... a-hem, this is a FREAKIN' masterpiece! Someone at DC should give this guy a job! What talent you all have here.
-> I figured I'd weigh in since first. This story, in some form or other, has been posted elsewhere. It belongs here more so than anywhere else. It was written over the course of a year (I have currently penned up through issue 13) and is a labor of love. I hope you enjoyed it!
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Post by Dark Knight of Steel on May 12, 2005 23:15:41 GMT -5
i certainly enjoyed your story...wish we could get more feedback from others though *hint hint* lol and stop being modest, lantern....lol
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Post by Dummybeau on May 13, 2005 1:00:01 GMT -5
Well it was a decent beginning.
I don't know where you're going with having all four of them being in the military, let alone part of the same project it seems, but I'll wait to see where that's going.
Overall I think that the writing was a little choppy. I don't know if that's the word I'm really looking for but it was kinda off to me. The story didn't really seem to flow naturally.
Like I said though good start. I look forward to the next issue.
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Post by thefastestmanalive on May 15, 2005 14:29:23 GMT -5
unfortunatly, im an idiot and posted my repy not on the 'feedback form' but at the actual story...sorry guys
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Post by thefastestmanalive on May 15, 2005 14:32:47 GMT -5
i enjoyed the hal/guy bicekring, but i agree that having all four of them in the military is a bit much...but hey, it was overall good...i do think some of the space scences could have been extended with abin actually fighting a bit more...but i cant wait to see the rest of the corps
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Post by lanternlad on May 15, 2005 17:24:29 GMT -5
The actual space scenes that were hinted to at the beginning of the story appear in a later issue as a flashback. And, yes, John is there in the story with Alan, Hal & Guy... but NONE of these characters are who they once were. It would be redundant to introduce all the GL's at once. You'll see as the story progresses. Keep reading!!!
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Post by Dark Knight of Steel on May 15, 2005 23:54:13 GMT -5
yep...i thought that when i read #1...but then later read other issues he'd finished and great stuff.... and thefastestman, i'll delete your feedback post on the actual story....lol
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Post by Dark Knight of Steel on Jun 9, 2005 2:51:16 GMT -5
Hey fanboys and fangirls, #2 is now up and ready for commenting
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Post by Lantern Lad on Jun 11, 2005 23:33:41 GMT -5
Come on... someone, anyone, Bueller?
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Post by thefastestmanalive on Jun 14, 2005 14:30:01 GMT -5
well done, interesting twist on sinestro my favorite scenes were with alan scott and abin sur
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Post by Lantern Lad on Jun 14, 2005 21:34:20 GMT -5
Well... if you like what I've done with Sinestro, you're just gonna LOVE the next issue!
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Post by Dummybeau on Jun 17, 2005 15:14:52 GMT -5
Yeah the legion thing is getting interesting. I'm most anxious to see what's up with Alan though. He and Kyle are my favorites. Looking forward to next ish.
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Post by Lantern Lad on Jun 21, 2005 22:20:24 GMT -5
Thanks for the kind words everyone. Stay tuned for the next issue, it's twice as long with 10 times the action. There's murder, mayhem & a rogue GL on the loose! Let the hate-mail commence!
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Post by thefastestmanalive on Jun 25, 2005 21:30:49 GMT -5
nice work once again LL good parrel of abin sur/hal jordan and sinestro/guy gardner cant wait to see tomar-re and the rest
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