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Post by HouseOfMystery on Aug 8, 2005 5:47:59 GMT -5
cluddered itsn't a word! not in england anyway...
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Post by superjosh123 on Aug 8, 2005 14:13:11 GMT -5
Well I thought it was a word......
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Post by Dark Knight of Steel on Aug 8, 2005 15:21:46 GMT -5
it is a word...but in english it isn't. they have words we don't and we have words they don't...i sound educated...lol i know only cause i have a close friend who's from englind.
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Post by superjosh123 on Aug 8, 2005 15:36:08 GMT -5
Ahhhh.....I have been enlightened
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Post by idlewilder on Aug 8, 2005 16:47:19 GMT -5
The word was just misspelled. It's "cluttered" (no "d's"), in American and English.
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Post by Lantern Lad on Aug 8, 2005 22:22:22 GMT -5
How come my feedback threads always turn into a debate over things that have nothing to do with me or my stories?
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Post by idlewilder on Aug 9, 2005 6:31:12 GMT -5
Are you saying your threads are cluttered?
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Post by Lantern Lad on Aug 9, 2005 18:26:26 GMT -5
No, but they certainly are cluddered!!!
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Post by lanternfan4life on Aug 9, 2005 20:25:30 GMT -5
Anyone looking forward to # 3 like I am?
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Post by HouseOfMystery on Aug 10, 2005 15:33:50 GMT -5
im gonna say... yes?
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Post by idlewilder on Aug 10, 2005 19:54:46 GMT -5
#3 is up, and so is #4, for that matter (The Tattoo Man, man!). Can't wait for #5, myself. I'd like to see more of General Scott.
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Post by Lantern Lad on Aug 11, 2005 0:11:29 GMT -5
General Scott's revelations are coming, but probably not as soon as you want!
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Post by HouseOfMystery on Aug 17, 2005 4:27:18 GMT -5
That was some nice stuff! And that kid... I knew it was gonna be you-know-who (you gotta read it to find out!) some really solid story telling, and the more consistently (IMO) great title (along with Flash...) Keep it coming!
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Post by superboy650 on Aug 18, 2005 5:36:39 GMT -5
It was a good story... The little teaser with the kid was nice... Never would have expected old 4-eyes (read it to find out which 4 eyes) to be a villain in Green Lantern but sounds interesting...
I had one big problem with this issue. Like Hal's fighting, the writing was sloppy. Grammar was all over the place. You jumped between present and past and everything in between so frequently it just go annoying. One of the first rules I learned as a was to stay in the same tense during a narrative. For Example: He ran to the door. She suprises him with a sweet kiss. Doesn't sound great, right? Just gotta make sure to revise and catch stuff like that. (Just a hint... for the most part... past tense is the best bet in these kinds of narratives.)
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Post by Lantern Lad on Aug 18, 2005 7:54:09 GMT -5
Didn't realize it did that... I try to keep everything in the past tense. Dammit. Thanks, I'll take a look at it.
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