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Post by idlewilder on Jul 19, 2005 20:42:29 GMT -5
Dan, I think that Frank Miller ripped you off for his new All-Star plot!
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Post by Lantern Lad on Jul 19, 2005 20:59:08 GMT -5
No doubt! I was going to say the same thing!!!
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Post by Dark Knight of Steel on Jul 20, 2005 11:20:45 GMT -5
how??? i haven't read it yet....
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Post by idlewilder on Jul 21, 2005 14:26:11 GMT -5
Issue three was good--- lots stuff going on, with the Flying Graysons plot, the Joker subplot (jeez, Crane's engaged to a bimbo!), and the Harvey Dent/Vicki Vale. Nice cliffhanger, too. Do we really have to wait another month for the next installment?
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Post by HouseOfMystery on Jul 21, 2005 15:11:50 GMT -5
dude... it seems... so...
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Post by Dark Knight of Steel on Jul 21, 2005 21:28:32 GMT -5
seems so..what? bad? i kinda agree, i think this was my worst bat issue so far honestly....but i'll try to improve...
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Post by Dummybeau on Jul 22, 2005 14:49:03 GMT -5
it's not that it was bad, it was a little short, a little short on action and a setup for four... still a decent read, couple of spelling/grammer errors, but it's more the spellcheck's fault than yours i'm sure. Can't wait till four.
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Post by Dark Knight of Steel on Jul 22, 2005 19:23:02 GMT -5
well, it wasn't only the spellcheck's fault. with my own stories, i usually edit them as i post, but the board was messing up, saying i was banned or something while i tried to post so i had to get nik (thefastestmanalive) to post for me...hence, no editing of my own story.
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Post by thefastestmanalive on Jul 22, 2005 23:36:28 GMT -5
yea- sorry about that....i guess i go through the stories a little fast...get it? fast? yea, i know- that was another really bad joke, but i don't know any other kind
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Post by superjosh123 on Jul 27, 2005 15:29:12 GMT -5
I thought it was okay.But it was a little on the short side.
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jrfan8
Young Justicer
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Post by jrfan8 on Jul 29, 2005 23:25:00 GMT -5
What a great ending! I would never have guessed Killer Croc. You've definately left me wanting more.
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Post by shadow on Jul 30, 2005 14:50:45 GMT -5
[glow=red,2,300]oo! come on! i was lookin through stuff and i havent read this yet and now u told me killer croc is at the end!! c'mon!! CRAP!! [/glow]
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Post by shadow on Jul 30, 2005 14:51:35 GMT -5
[glow=red,2,300]well at least now i learned sometin[/glow]
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Post by Dark Knight of Steel on Jul 30, 2005 15:45:04 GMT -5
really, you didn't think croc? i thought that i pretty much gave it away saying the graysons were mauled....but glad i surprised someone...
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Post by Lantern Lad on Aug 1, 2005 20:35:01 GMT -5
I only knew because you told me... I hadn't figured it out either. I thought it was a very good read... just wish it was a little longer. You used Batman's detective abilities perfectly. Is Harley engaged to Crane? I didn't get that while I was reading it... I thought they were just partners.
Anyway, I really enjoyed it... Good job Dan!
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