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Post by Dark Knight of Steel on Jun 5, 2005 9:36:46 GMT -5
thanks, i kinda think this issue was worse than the first but glad someone liked it...lol
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Post by superboy650 on Jun 5, 2005 22:53:47 GMT -5
I liked it. It was interesting. I'm really interested in seeing where this is all going.
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Post by Dark Knight of Steel on Jun 5, 2005 23:42:17 GMT -5
cool...hope i don't let ya down...lol
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Post by thefastestmanalive on Jun 14, 2005 14:14:58 GMT -5
i think it's on par with the 1st one, that doesn't mean it's bad, but it could be better
i really like batman with dent and the rest of them, but you seem to be having a little trouble with superman
i like the fact that you have clark investigating, so you can see him in action, as well as superman
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Post by Dark Knight of Steel on Jun 15, 2005 0:41:39 GMT -5
yeah...i know my supes is kinda bad...lol i admit this, but soon Superboy650 will be handling the dialogue and such for me while I plot out the stories...hopefully then LoS will improve. SB should be starting with issue #4
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Post by Dummybeau on Jun 17, 2005 15:10:46 GMT -5
Don't worry dialogue is kinda hard to write. You're doing a decent job. I agree though I'm just not feeling LoS. I'm not that big a Superman fan period though so therein may lie the problem.
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Post by Dark Knight of Steel on Jul 8, 2005 20:17:38 GMT -5
sorry about the delay guys, but #3 is now up
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Post by Lantern Lad on Jul 8, 2005 23:46:19 GMT -5
I liked it... The Mxy dialogue was fun. Superman asking him for help though was odd... Is Supes that naive? It felt like an episode of the animated series!
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Post by Dark Knight of Steel on Jul 9, 2005 0:26:35 GMT -5
yeah, i know, to be quite honest, this issue was a bit of a rush. i'm sure you could probably tell. i'm just having so much trouble with supes, i'm procrastinating, waiting till the last minute to finish, but as you are aware of, this last minute i was seriously pre-occupied....so it is certainly rushed a bit. but the bit about asking mxy for help....i don't necessarily think of that as being niave. because, mxyzptlk is not actually evil, and i think that supes might notice that. and, if you notice, mxy did help indirectly by giving him a clue......and i agree, this did feel like an episode of the animated series....but with Mxy, most things will feel like the animated series...lol
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Post by superjosh123 on Jul 27, 2005 15:35:16 GMT -5
I hope you dont use too much of myxy because though he is a fun character it makes the whole issue seem kind of chidish.Just my opinion.You are getting better with writing supes.
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Post by Dark Knight of Steel on Jul 27, 2005 17:23:20 GMT -5
i'm not planning on using him too much. issue 6 will be the last issue i have planned with him in it...that will be the end of his "arc"
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Post by JaR-V on Aug 2, 2005 22:12:04 GMT -5
I also like toyman and mxy given him...well....toyman. there are a couple things I likes to be changed in the comic world a fan made.this is one of them.and the sinestro picture.
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Post by Dark Knight of Steel on Aug 10, 2005 12:25:16 GMT -5
A mysterious new hero seems to be beating Superman to the punch. Who is this new copycat Superman? Also, John Henry's plan to get Superman out of the way unfolds just as John Henry himself is attacked.
NOW POSTED
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Post by superjosh123 on Aug 11, 2005 11:56:42 GMT -5
I really liked this issue.Its almost like reign of the supermen,but without superman being dead.
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Post by JaR-V on Aug 11, 2005 14:57:03 GMT -5
This issue was WAY too short!
I enjoyed that five minutes of reading it though.
I liked the way superboy got introduced to. At first I thought it was bizzaro.
And whoever drew that pic of supes did a good job(I think it was lantenlad)
Pretty good issue
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