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Post by superjosh123 on Jul 4, 2005 22:44:30 GMT -5
I'm sorry to say this and it seems I am the only one who thought so but I did'nt like it.You have a great talent for writing but I get bored with it after a while.This isn't to sound mean but parts of it seem to drag on.It's still pretty good though.
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Post by Dummybeau on Jul 22, 2005 14:51:23 GMT -5
I like how you're placin Artemis and Diana up to be on opposite sides of the war effort. It's not that hard to tell which side of the line your politcal views sit on though. lol...
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Post by superjosh123 on Jul 29, 2005 20:10:52 GMT -5
You know what.I changed my mind.After reading more and more of it.I am starting to see why everyone likes this.It really is good.
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Post by thefastestmanalive on Sept 1, 2005 22:13:41 GMT -5
another thrilling issue kevin i love the ending, despite the fact that it makes me want to know what happens next!
interesting twists with cheata...still wondering what barbra's up to
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Post by Dummybeau on Sept 6, 2005 23:39:54 GMT -5
Another excellent installment. I'm really lovin this norse twist you're throwing in. And I also like that you're throwin my fave roman god in the mix as well... I won't spoil it for anyone who hasn't guessed yet.
I can't wait to see where Artemis' extra abilities are comin from, and the Cheata/Donna teaser was cool too.
I think superjosh is right, some parts do drag a little, but you have an elegant way of writing that even then makes up for it. Bring on the next ish.
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Post by Dark Knight of Steel on Sept 21, 2005 10:48:44 GMT -5
and the next issue is posted.
As Diana's body struggles between life and death, her soul meets with Antiope, to learn more truths about her mystical birth.
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Post by Dummybeau on Sept 27, 2005 17:59:23 GMT -5
Another great read, I finally have a criticism though :-p
I wish you wouldn't make it so clear which side we should be rooting for. Armbruster is such a slimy, disgusting, bigoted a-hole that even if you're for the war you can't possibly be for him. You can't feel a hint of sympathy for the fact that Artemis is being manipulated because she's such a prick. Even after she finds her way out of this predicament I feel she'll be so screwed that none of us will even care that she overcame.
Poly's a goddess? I'll reserve judgement I suppose... on to the next ish!
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Post by bgintraning on Sept 27, 2005 20:58:56 GMT -5
I think it rocks!
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Post by Dark Knight of Steel on Nov 16, 2005 18:05:10 GMT -5
Issue #6 is now up
The final showdown is near. Diana must argue for her freedom against the council of the Amazons, and face the judgement of her own mother. Plus, both Valerie and Etta's lives are put in danger as their captivity continues!
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